Lyrics that make you cringe

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Accy cyclist

Legendary Member
I keep getting life is a minestrone by 10cc, but it isn't that one! :scratch:
 

Mad Doug Biker

Just a damaged guy.
Location
Craggy Island
I keep getting life is a minestrone by 10cc, but it isn't that one! :scratch:

To further illustrate how easily I get lost with the music world, I genuinely thought you were listening to Rap music and you were being quite progressive/open minded for your years.

For some reason, 10cc instantly made me think '10 Cent'... But I realise now that that was 50 Cent, or something anyway.

... Please, don't judge me too much! 🤣
 
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Beebo

Firm and Fruity
Location
Hexleybeef
Billy Joel - Piano Man.

It’s a great song too.
But it is clearly done to rhyme gin with in.
 
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Dogtrousers

Dogtrousers

Kilometre nibbler
That is exactly what I mean. Really makes you think come on, you can do better than that.


It's nine o'clock on a Saturday
The regular crowd shuffles in
There's an old man sittin' next to me
Makin' love to his tonic and gin
 

winjim

Straddle the line, discord and rhyme
That is exactly what I mean. Really makes you think come on, you can do better than that.


It's nine o'clock on a Saturday
The regular crowd shuffles in
There's an old man sittin' next to me
Makin' love to his tonic and gin

I think it works. There's probably a fancy name for it, reversing the order gives it a different emphasis.

Livin' easy
Lovin' free
Season ticket on a one way ride
Askin' nothin'
Leave me be
Takin' everythin' in my stride
Don't need reason
Don't need rhyme

Ain't nothin' that I'd rather do
Goin' down
Party time
My friends are gonna be there too
 

Beebo

Firm and Fruity
Location
Hexleybeef
I think it works. There's probably a fancy name for it, reversing the order gives it a different emphasis.

Livin' easy
Lovin' free
Season ticket on a one way ride
Askin' nothin'
Leave me be
Takin' everythin' in my stride
Don't need reason
Don't need rhyme

Ain't nothin' that I'd rather do
Goin' down
Party time
My friends are gonna be there too

We would all be on the highway to hell if those lyrics were acceptable.
 
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Dogtrousers

Dogtrousers

Kilometre nibbler
I think it works. There's probably a fancy name for it, reversing the order gives it a different emphasis.

Livin' easy
Lovin' free
Season ticket on a one way ride
Askin' nothin'
Leave me be
Takin' everythin' in my stride
Don't need reason
Don't need rhyme

Ain't nothin' that I'd rather do
Goin' down
Party time
My friends are gonna be there too

I think the fancy name you're looking for is anastrophe https://simple.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anastrophe

(Edit. Having read the wiki page, I think it probably isn't quite the right word. But it sounds fancy)

There's a thin line between creative use of language and just shoehorning in words for the sake of a rhyme. Which side of that line "tonic and gin" falls is really a matter of personal taste.
 
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