No experience myself as a rider, but a good video in my opinion.
If possible, some more attention to typo's would be nice, but I have the feeling you selected and edited the images pretty good.
Only thing is, that it's a bit hard to understand the race situation...
Like maybe a (rough) lap counter (how much laps to go) in a corner would be nice and a race situation:
something like this.... "Leader - chaser - my chasing group", cause I'm not sure if you ever "unlapped" yourself and caught everybody with that group or you just caught back the rest of the peloton and sprinted for something like a 3rd place.
Had the feeling you waited too long to start your sprint. If your mate was pulling the group for you to sprint, you need to leave his wheel a bit earlier and start the sprint. At those sprinting speeds I would think it to be hard to catch up the guy who starts the sprint, since probably none of the riders around have a Kittel-like top-speed, so whatever distance you get from kicking first will take quite some time to make up.
p.s.
Is this race "inspired by Tour of Qatar"?
