Apart from the angled speed hump (which I'd be very dubious about in the wet) I think its one of the best pieces I've seen on the subject. Plenty of clear illustrations, concise and addresses some of the main traffic layout issues.
As for speed humps I'd liked them banned; when I'm on a road trying to be aware of all the traffic/pedestrians around me I could really do without having to worry about how flat the road is - they're as dangerous as pot-holes in some cases... Instead 20 limits and enforcement would be better.
You could add a link to some of the lists of completely insane cycle lane layouts that councils occasionally come up with, to highlight things not to do, but that may detract from the succintness.